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I did this entire picture last night, in about two hours. I'm not sure if that means I'm fast, impatient, or manic.
It's based around a plotbunny that hopped into my head yesterday, involving how Jak came to be capable of speech. I'm working on the fic for it, but it's slow in coming and I'm certain it's going to be fairly short. It's also very depressing, and more than a little painful. I write too much violence, methinks. Anyway! Our lovely Jak, probably about a year or so into his captivity at the hands of Baron Praxis. So far they've tried a number of methods for channeling Dark Eco into him, and right now they're trying an IV. I had great fun designing the machine it all hooks into--a mix between Precursor and modern technology, because the Precursors were the best when it came to containing Dark Eco. ...I hope the actual fic will explain it better. Again, I think I almost killed myself on the background. But I did do a complete background, so it's all good. Also I'm very happy with how his hair came out--I was a little wary about getting the green in there, but I think it came out pretty well. Does it look okay? They all have such weird hair... Drawn with Prismacolor markers and pencils on heavy-weight sketch paper. Jak, Dark Eco, Jak and Daxter and Jak II © Naughty Dog Art © Me EDIT: First installment of story, Captive Voice, is posted on my LiveJournal arts community. |
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I'm the Duchess of Candy Mountain in #Snicketania!
Faeries away! Fetch me that flower.
Up and down and up and down,
I will lead them abandon.
"That guy is a total patoot."
"He's, like, fifty patoots!"
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I want a fanclub. Or maybe just a fan and a club to beat people into submission with. Yeah...
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I'm the Duchess of Candy Mountain in #Snicketania!
Faeries away! Fetch me that flower.
Up and down and up and down,
I will lead them abandon.
"That guy is a total patoot."
"He's, like, fifty patoots!"
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Women never have anything to wear. Ignore the racks of clothes in the closet; you just "don't understand".
i'm confuzzled!!!
Jak is sexy by the way
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Lizzie:Yaoi senses tingling...
Alyx:no wonder, Sora and riku are swimming
Riku: Sora, that girl won't give me back my shirt unless i make out with you...and she has a camera.
Lizzie: *holds shirt in one hand, camera in another and a huge grin*
Just think of a nun. They are forbidden to talk because they are trying to become pure and if u want to be pure u are not allowd to speak.
Same with angels beautiful, pure and mute.
Keep it up!
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Laugh now because tomorrow may never come.
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I'm Telma in the Legend of Zelda crew. [[link]
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I am a fan of Yaoi, Yuri, Hentai, AND Mpreg and I'm proud to admit to it!
I would BEG for this fanfic! Shall I beg? (Gets on knees and begs)
There are a couple of niggly things... the IV didn't seem very secured. Even when you're in a hospital and not a mad-scientist-prison, they generally strap those things in pretty securely so you dont accidentally jolt it, catch it on something or rip it out.
Also, they gave him a BED! With a pillow and blanket! And they left the eco (which is an ouch substance) sitting happily within reach? If I were Jak, it'd be smashed on the floor and the IV in the nearest person's neck.
All that aside, however.. there were several small touches I thought were fantastic.
The precursor-style container and rod was great! I would never think of something like that!
The green roots of his hair was excellently done, it looked good and many people forget it.
The hand that was injected had claws! Whilst the other didn't! A very nice touch!
I'm curious as to what the purple smudges are. Bruises from being hit/straining against restraints or eco simply tainting the skin here and there?
It's called voice, and you've done a bang-up job of getting him holding his throat and looking confused/pained/thoughtful... But I'm curious as to back story. Did he regain his voice due to the screaming? Is he holding his raw throat wondering how he made those sounds? Or was it the Eco?
It's unexplained if he never spoke through physical inability, mental inability or simply through his own choice.
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